2005年高考英文滿分作文及名師評析

  2005高考英文滿分作文

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假定你是李華，正是英國牛津參加短期語言培訓，計畫星期天去倫敦旅遊。網際網路上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內容)。請給該旅行社發一封電子郵件，詢問有關情況。

注意：1.詞數100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。

2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

3.參考辭彙：牛津——Oxford 費用——fee

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?

How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

Yours,

Li Hua

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本文是根據畫面的提示來寫一封電子郵件。作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要點，敘述較為完整;其次，作者運用一些過渡句和銜接詞將文章串聯，意思連貫。文章中採用了第一人稱和一般現在時，這是值得肯定的地方。

　　[全國卷Ⅲ](四川、雲南、陝西等地區用)

【試題回放】假設你是李華，最近國內一家英文報紙正在討論北京動物園是否應遷出市區。以下是你所在班級討論的情況。請你給該報寫一封信，反映討論結果。

　　贊成遷出：反對遷出：

1.遊客多，交通堵塞

2.郊區環境好1.建於1906年，中外聞名

2.搬遷易造成動物死亡

注意：1.詞數100字左右，信的開頭已為你寫好。

2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

3.參考辭彙： 郊區—suburb

Dear Editor ,

Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

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這篇文章寫得還是比較精彩的。要點表達得完整而準確，清楚展示了主題。先提出了文章的主題，進而列出了贊成的觀點及其相關的理由，同時在其後又給出了反面的觀點，論據十分充足。文章結構嚴謹，前後連貫。

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第一節情景作文(20分)

美國中學生jeff將要來你所在的紅星中學學習中文，經協商安排住在你家。假設你是李華，請給Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國後的生活安排。

注意：1. 信的開頭已為你寫好。

2.詞數不少於60。

Dear Jeff,

I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

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這篇文章的特點還是比較清晰的，第一，作者根據圖畫將文章的要點概括完整，內容充實而豐富，結構緊湊，有層次感;第二，本文沒有採用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當，段落過渡自然，令人耳目一新。